Thursday, January 23, 2014

Indie Author #25



Lightning Fire: The Blue Moon's Calling  Lightning Fire: The Blue Moon's Calling by 
I received this book in exchange for an honest review (LoP or Lovers of Paranormal)- GoodReads.com

I absolutely love the concept of werewolves and fairies having a romance. The union between to races make for a string pulling event on the heart. Luna is a very clean, crisp breath of fresh air in the eyes & world of Arn. Things could have gone wrong immediately once Arn found out the misdeeds of the fairy kingdoms. He made the best of the situation present and made sure they aligned with what he wanted out of the meeting. 

I found thing refreshing and interesting. What threw me off was the multiple errors in grammar, wording, and punctuation. I was not found of having to figure out who was actually apart of the conversation if it was Luna or Lily. I was tossed off a few times by the miss print. I believe this would have garnered much more from a thorough editing or at least a once/twice over by a critical eye.


I am not a professional reviewer.  These are just my personal opinions.

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